Tuesday, April 7, 2009

At a glance p 200

Website

Target audience: students of Mr. Bevill's English 103 class

Content and main argument: History of technology, information on how it has evolved, movie clips, work done by our group. Technology has transformed beyond belief in a short amount of time.

Purpose: To educate about technology and it's improvements

Level of decorum: organized, neat

Navigation and layout: we will use a panel on the left side, as most websites, to navigate to and from our work

Pamphlet
Target Audience: Mr. Bevill's English 103 class

Content: History of cell phones and how they came to the level of technology they are at today

Purpose: To educate, inform

Level of decorum: creative, colorful, eye-pleasing

Layout: Information throughout, many pictures.

Initial Brainstorm for Multimedia Project

I think our group wants to do something with how technology has improved over the past few decades or so. I think we will work separately and then combine all of our efforts together at the end on a website to organize all of our work. Each of us has different resources we can use to do separate parts better than others in our group may be able to, and so we will work on each of our parts with our own resources and programs to produce a final work that will be put together at the end for our presentation.

First Draft and Peer Review for Research Projects

The first draft of my research paper on vegetarianism I think was reviewed well. The peer review helped a lot with rewording and correcting my over-usage of similar phrases and words. It helped put my paper in the perspective of someone who knew nothing about my subject at all. They explained to me certain parts that were hard to understand or what needed more background information. This is also helped to lengthen my paper closer to the requirement.