First Draft and Peer Review for Research Projects

The first draft of my research paper on vegetarianism I think was reviewed well. The peer review helped a lot with rewording and correcting my over-usage of similar phrases and words. It helped put my paper in the perspective of someone who knew nothing about my subject at all. They explained to me certain parts that were hard to understand or what needed more background information. This is also helped to lengthen my paper closer to the requirement.