Peer Review Session

My peer review session went well. I traded papers with Paul Burns and read his paper about a Nike ad. It was a very interesting paper and I enjoyed talking to him about it. There were only a few grammatical errors in his paper and he said there were only a few lines that were confusing or run-on in my paper. This is a good sign because all I need to do is edit my paper and review it before turning in my final for a grade. Overall it was a good experience to hear what another student had to say about my paper and see if he could offer any new ideas to make my paper better. He told me what I could fix and I told him what he could fix and both of our papers are better for it.